Oct 27, 2008 19:41
15 yrs ago
русский term
Еще совсем не пыльная листвa...
русский => английский
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Еще совсем не пыльная листва колыхалась внизу
Еще совсем не пыльная листва колыхалась внизу, окутывая зелеными прозрачными облаками старые крыши.
Еще совсем не пыльная листва...
Еще совсем не пыльная листва...
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(английский)
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2 час
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The foliage, still fresh,...
You can say, from the context, what's going on here, but it doesn't sound to me as if these were "leaves" "fluttering down", but, rather, "foliage" (still attached to the trees), swaying down over the roofs, somehow.
The foliage, still fresh, swayed [waved, hung] down over the old rooftops, wrapping them with transparent clouds of green.
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Note added at 2 hrs (2008-10-27 21:51:14 GMT)
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Anyway, the image of "leaves" becoming "dusty" sounds very odd in English.
The foliage, still fresh, swayed [waved, hung] down over the old rooftops, wrapping them with transparent clouds of green.
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Note added at 2 hrs (2008-10-27 21:51:14 GMT)
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Anyway, the image of "leaves" becoming "dusty" sounds very odd in English.
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17 мин
leafage, not at all dusty,
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Note added at 23 mins (2008-10-27 20:04:46 GMT)
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leafage, not at all dusty yet,
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Note added at 23 mins (2008-10-27 20:04:46 GMT)
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leafage, not at all dusty yet,
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50 мин
The dust hadn't yet covered the leaves that were fluttering below/down there
The dust hadn't yet covered the leaves that were fluttering below/down there
57 мин
The foliage, not yet dusty, fluttered down ...
... covering the old roofs (or rooves) with translucent green clouds.
10 час
Leaves undusted yet shook down
Leaves undusted yet shook down
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