Jan 23, 2004 23:37
20 yrs ago
Russian term
Works in: English to Russian
Phrase please
Russian to English
Bus/Financial
Консультирование и рассмотрение инвестиционных проектов по вопросам управления рисками, оптимизации процедур внутреннего контроля и корпоративного управления. -
Proposed translations
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Consulting and analysis of investment projects on issues related to risk management, optimization of internal control and corporate management procedures. -
Отметим также, что русский здесь, как мне кажется, кривоват:)...
Yours
T.
Отметим также, что русский здесь, как мне кажется, кривоват:)...
Yours
T.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks a lot!"
+5
1 hr
Consulting and consideration of investment projects regarding questions of...
...risk management, the optimization of internal management procedures, and corporate management.
BTW, Natalie's point is well-taken. I'm confident you knew most or all of these words and/or individual phrases
BTW, Natalie's point is well-taken. I'm confident you knew most or all of these words and/or individual phrases
Peer comment(s):
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nrabate
: matters of risk management, optimization of internal inspection procedures...
2 hrs
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AlxGr8
: matters is better
3 hrs
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Janina Nowrot
6 hrs
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Jack Doughty
: I suppose one has to accept horrible jargon words like "optimization", but I would rather say "perfecting".
8 hrs
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Сергей Лузан
: matters/ problems/ subjects are quite interchangeable IMHO
10 hrs
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5 hrs
Dorene Cornwell
Native in English
Thorough, sensitive, and idiomatic
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, Spanish to English, English, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
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regarding risk management, optimized internal control procedures, and corporate management
consulting and evaluation of investment projects regarding (matters of--probably optional) risk management, optimized internal control procedures, and corporate management.
consulting and evaluation of investment projects regarding (matters of--probably optional in a final edit because it doesn't add anything!) risk management and optimized internal control procedures and corporate management.
I see Natalie's point, but this is one of those long strings of things in the genitive case that can create ambiguities. The second variant above is intended to illustrate the ambiguity I see. I note the ambiguity but the first version is definitely cleaer to me.
consulting and evaluation of investment projects regarding (matters of--probably optional in a final edit because it doesn't add anything!) risk management and optimized internal control procedures and corporate management.
I see Natalie's point, but this is one of those long strings of things in the genitive case that can create ambiguities. The second variant above is intended to illustrate the ambiguity I see. I note the ambiguity but the first version is definitely cleaer to me.
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