Glossary entry

Spanish term or phrase:

copas

English translation:

crowns/uppermost branches

Added to glossary by Taña Dalglish
Mar 14, 2015 15:24
9 yrs ago
Spanish term

copas

Spanish to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Short Story
Tengo la siguiente frase para traducir y no estoy segura de cómo traducir "copas".

La frase es: "Ahora las copas de los eucaliptos están quietas, como si el viento se hubiese muerto, como si el aire estuviera estancado".

Por el momento encontré "crowns" or "top" pero quería chequear si esta es la traducción o hay alguna más exacta.

¡Gracias!
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Mar 14, 2015 15:24: changed "Kudoz queue" from "In queue" to "Public"

Mar 28, 2015 12:47: Taña Dalglish Created KOG entry

Proposed translations

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crowns

http://www.scielo.org.ar/scielo.php?script=sci_arttext&pid=S...
RESUMEN
Los resultados muestran una modificación de la estructura inicial del PA. Los eucaliptos son aún dominantes en su participación de la cobertura de ***copas.***
Palabras clave: Silvicultura urbana; Infraestructura verde; SIG.

ABSTRACT

The results show a modification of the initial structure of the PA. The eucalypts are still dominant in its share of the **crown** cover.

Modelos de producción de madera sólida en plantaciones ...
http://rabida.uhu.es/dspace/handle/10272/1587
by L Nutto - ‎2006 - ‎Cited by 2 - ‎Related articles
La toma de muestras comprende más de 900 Eucalyptus globulus medidos en ... El modelo basado en el ancho de **copa** permite calcular el espacio vital ... at breast height (d1,3) and **crown** diameter calculated from this area was found.

"crowns" should do it!

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Thank you Mariana.
Peer comment(s):

agree Charles Davis : Crowns is nice
4 mins
Thanks Charles.
agree Laura Messer : I think this sounds better than "treetop" here since the type of tree is specified.
9 mins
Thank you Laura.
neutral Carol Gullidge : For me, crowns sounds too 'scientific' for the context - ie, not the right register :(
16 mins
Perhaps a matter of opinion, Carol, but not to me. Thank you anyway for your comments. Un abrazo.
agree franglish
1 hr
Thank you franglish. Un abrazo.
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treetops

Copa: f. Conjunto de ramas y hojas que forma la parte superior de un árbol.

Treetop: the top or uppermost branches of a tree.
Example sentence:

3. f. Conjunto de ramas y hojas que forma la parte superior de un árbol.

Peer comment(s):

agree Carol Gullidge : As this is a short story and not a botanical treatise!
18 mins
Thank you, Carol. I was thinking the same thing: "crowns" sound nice, but the register might not work well.
agree Carla Bucholz
5 hrs
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uppermost branches

Treetops doesn't work with the name of the tree present, as Laura notes. Crown is correct, but I don't think it fits all that well with the tree named either. So, an option could be:

"Now the uppermost eucalyptus barnches are still, as though the wind had died..."


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Oops, I meant "branches" sorry about that...

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https://www.google.es/search?q="uppermost branches"&gws_rd=c...

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Nobody is saying that you "can't" use eucalyptus and treetops in the same sentence. However, flow is important to me in this type of text, and I think "eucalyptus" interferes with it.
For example, " The treetops ceased their swaying, as though the wind had died (away)..." would be fine by me. Indeed, one might ask whether it is necessary to mention the type of tree at all, especially if it has already been cited previously in the text.

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Try saying "eucalyptus treetops" with a mouth full of peanuts and see what happens :)
Peer comment(s):

neutral Carol Gullidge : I don't understand why you can't mention tree tops and eucalyptus in one sentence!
3 mins
It just seems like a bit of a mouthful.
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