Aug 22, 2022 18:09
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English term

Purple Prose

English to Portuguese Art/Literary Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting Music, arts
Olá tradutores,

Eu estava uma música e me deparei com esta expressão: "Your purple prose just give you way".

The things you say
Your purple prose just give you away
The things you say
In thought I love you more
The things you say
Your purple prose just give you away
The things you say

Agradeço desde já a colaboração de todos

Discussion

Nick Taylor Aug 22, 2022:
@ et al Henry Harland, foi um romancista e editor americano.Escrita em 1903 esta é uma bela história romântica em prosa floreada da época.

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linguagem rebuscada

fala rebuscada, cheia de floreios
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agree MARINA MOTA
234 days
thx, Marina
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conversa floreada

Purple prose é querer falar bonito demais, com palavras rebuscadas. Em português, temos o verbo florear para isso.
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agree Nick Taylor : or PROSA floreada
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agree Lucas Pereira
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agree Patricia Donda
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Prosa afetada

como se trata de uma poesia, creio ser importante pensar na métrica e na rima:

O que tu falas
A prosa afetada delata

Seria a minha sugestão para respeitar o verso de 4 e 8 sílabas desse trecho... e as rimas




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Note added at 2 horas (2022-08-22 20:56:01 GMT)
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estava pensando sobre o "purple prose", creio que "prosa enfeitada"
ficaria melhor...
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Reference comments

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Reference:

Purple prose

In literary criticism, purple prose is overly ornate prose text that may disrupt a narrative flow by drawing undesirable attention to its own extravagant style of writing, thereby diminishing the appreciation of the prose overall. Purple prose is characterized by the excessive use of adjectives, adverbs, and metaphors. When it is limited to certain passages, they may be termed purple patches or purple passages, standing out from the rest of the work.

Purple prose is criticized for desaturating the meaning in an author's text by overusing melodramatic and fanciful descriptions. As there is no precise rule or absolute definition of what constitutes purple prose, deciding if a text, passage, or complete work has fallen victim is a somewhat subjective decision.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Purple_prose
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