Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
Introducing you to the Romanian market
English answer:
Your key to unlocking the Romanian market
Added to glossary by
Ltemes
Mar 23, 2005 22:53
19 yrs ago
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Native in: Romanian 
Works in: English to Romanian, French to Romanian, Spanish to Romanian, and 1 more.
introducing you to...
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Hi,
This is a rather unusual question. It's about a slogan I intend to use as a translator specialized in marketing communication and localization.
It goes like this: "Introducing you to the Romanian market"
I would like to know what you think as native speakers of English.
Does it sound awkward?
What would an end-client think of it?
What would an agency think of it?
What do you think of it?
Would you suggest anything to improve it?
Any suggestion is most welcome.
Many thanks!
Dan
This is a rather unusual question. It's about a slogan I intend to use as a translator specialized in marketing communication and localization.
It goes like this: "Introducing you to the Romanian market"
I would like to know what you think as native speakers of English.
Does it sound awkward?
What would an end-client think of it?
What would an agency think of it?
What do you think of it?
Would you suggest anything to improve it?
Any suggestion is most welcome.
Many thanks!
Dan
Responses
| 4 +7 | Your key to unlocking the Romanian market |
Ltemes
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| 4 +3 | Bringing the Romanian Market to you! |
Robert Donahue (X)
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| 3 | Introducing, the Romanian market |
rangepost
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Responses
+7
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Your key to unlocking the Romanian market
That's my suggestion. I think your slogan works but it doesn't have as much of a hook.
Another one I can think of:
** Bringing the Romanian market to your doorstep.
Another one I can think of:
** Bringing the Romanian market to your doorstep.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Many thanks!"
+3
7 mins
Bringing the Romanian Market to you!
Hopefully this helps. Good luck!
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Note added at 10 mins (2005-03-23 23:03:55 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
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Note added at 18 mins (2005-03-23 23:11:55 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
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Note added at 23 mins (2005-03-23 23:17:23 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
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Note added at 10 mins (2005-03-23 23:03:55 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
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Note added at 18 mins (2005-03-23 23:11:55 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
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Note added at 23 mins (2005-03-23 23:17:23 GMT)
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rewrite and example
\"Bringing the Romanian market to you!\"
http://www.thecanadianmarketplace.com/
Peer comment(s):
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gtreyger (X)
: I am lazy, so it is better to bring something to me, as opposed to introduce me to something :-)))
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Thanks Gennadiy. It's catchy (and I do say so myself).
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zenlee
3 hrs
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Thank you Zenlee
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Tsogt Gombosuren
7 hrs
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Thanks Mongol
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4 hrs
Introducing, the Romanian market
Just my take. I do like your slogan as well.
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