Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

move

English answer:

would be moved

Added to glossary by literary
Oct 11, 2011 11:10
12 yrs ago
English term

move

English Science Geography
In the positive North Atlantic
Oscillation (NAO) index years, however, the areas
north of the thermal front are covered with warm
anomaly water and those to the south are covered
with cool anomaly water,
which means that the gradients of the thermal front
would be made obscure or its location moved.

A grammar question, actually.
How should I understand "moved"?
"would be moved"? Written by a non-native speaker (from Asia).
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Discussion

Tony M Oct 11, 2011:
@ Jenni Maybe technically, yes, but you see this kind of writing the whole time; I think the real thing that makes it akward is that the first posessive uses 'of the' and the second 's; had it been written "...the thermal front's gradients would be made obscure or its location [would be] moved", it might have been clearer — though of course the 's posessive for an abstract concept is uglier still!
Jenni Lukac (X) Oct 11, 2011:
There is a syntax problem here. The writer talks about gradients and then follows up with "its" instead of "their." Technically, the writer should have repeated "thermal front" for clarity.

Responses

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Selected

would be moved

The word "moved" implies "would be moved" - the "would be" is removed to make the sentence more simple and elegant and avoid repetition.
Peer comment(s):

agree Ty Kendall
4 mins
Thank you!
agree Ailish Holly
2 hrs
Thank you!
agree Jim Tucker (X) : nothing wrong with the English here; stylistically "obscured" for "made obscure" would be better and clearer
4 hrs
Thank you!
agree Nedra Rivera Huntington
7 hrs
Thank you!
agree eski
8 hrs
Thank you!
agree Phong Le
1 day 2 hrs
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9 mins

the location of the thermal front moved (changed location, transferred to a different location)

gradients of the thermal front would be made obscure or its location moved. =>
gradients of the thermal front would be made obscure or the location of the thermal front moved (changed location, transferred to a different location).
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40 mins

would be moved to a different location

Yes, the "would be" is implied, as a repetition of the "would be" that comes just before it. The location of the thermal front would be displaced to a different location.

We know that this refers to the thermal front because of the possessive pronoun "its". If it was referring to the gradientes, the possessive pronoun "their" would have been used.
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+1
4 hrs

may

If the conditions that develop are not a certainly but a possibility, It seems to me that whole part of the sentence might be better put this way:

"... ,which means that the gradients of the thermal front may become obscure or the location of the front may move."
Peer comment(s):

agree JaneTranslates : I like your version. Very clear.
1 hr
Thanks Jane.
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