Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Deutsch term or phrase:
hohe VIP-Dichte
Englisch translation:
celebrity-packed
Added to glossary by
Lizzie
Sep 21, 2003 20:33
20 yrs ago
Deutsch term
hohe VIP-Dichte
Deutsch > Englisch
Marketing
Werbung/PR
In der PPT-Firmendarstellung einer PR-Agentur werden verschiedene Events beschrieben.
Es geht um folgenden Satz:
Gezieltes Produktsampling mit einem aufmerksamstarken Promotion-Auftritt auf exklusiven Veranstaltungen **mit hoher VIP-Dichte**.
I know exactly what this sentence is saying, but I can't seem to phrase it well. This is one section on a PPT slide with a minimum of space, so extreme wordiness won't work. I do not feel comfortable using the word "density" here. Maybe "attended by a high number of VIPs" or "attracting a high number of VIPs"?
Es geht um folgenden Satz:
Gezieltes Produktsampling mit einem aufmerksamstarken Promotion-Auftritt auf exklusiven Veranstaltungen **mit hoher VIP-Dichte**.
I know exactly what this sentence is saying, but I can't seem to phrase it well. This is one section on a PPT slide with a minimum of space, so extreme wordiness won't work. I do not feel comfortable using the word "density" here. Maybe "attended by a high number of VIPs" or "attracting a high number of VIPs"?
Proposed translations
(Englisch)
| 3 +5 | celebrity-packed |
Deborah Shannon
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| 3 +8 | large VIP presence |
jerrie
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| 4 +2 | for a high-status crowd |
William Stein
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| 3 +1 | attended by numerous VIPs |
Aniello Scognamiglio (X)
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| 4 | with many VIPs |
Armorel Young
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| 3 | attended by |
Adela Van Gils
|
Change log
May 11, 2005 10:30: Deborah Shannon changed "Field (specific)" from "(none)" to "Werbung/PR"
Proposed translations
+5
1 Stunde
Deborah Shannon
Deutschland
Deutschland
Native in Englisch
Works in field
Deutschland
Published academic translator DE-EN (GB)
Native in: Englisch (Variant: British)
Works in: Deutsch > Englisch
Related KudoZ points
:
11
Selected
celebrity-packed
to characterise the events.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I really appreciate everyone's help with this; there were so many good suggestions. I went with Deborah's suggestion because it fit in best with the overall tone of the text. Thanks!"
+2
1 Min.
William Stein
Costa Rica
Costa Rica
Native in Englisch
Costa Rica
Translations that read like originals
Native in: Englisch (Variants: US, UK) 
Works in: Französisch > Englisch, Deutsch > Englisch, Spanisch > Englisch, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
4
for a high-status crowd
for a crowd of celebrities
but "with a high density of VIPs" is perfectly acceptable
but "with a high density of VIPs" is perfectly acceptable
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Narasimhan Raghavan
: with all the three versions
7 Stunden
|
| agree |
Boris Nedkov
: well found
8 Stunden
|
+1
3 Min.
attended by numerous VIPs
the shortest I can think of
3 Min.
Adela Van Gils
Niederlande
Niederlande
Native in Englisch
Specializes in field
Niederlande
Happy clients - references on request
Native in: Niederländisch 
, Englisch
Works in: Deutsch > Niederländisch, Französisch > Niederländisch, Englisch > Niederländisch, and 2 more.
attended by
that is a good translation
+8
14 Min.
large VIP presence
maybe
for a short version
for a short version
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Norbert Hermann
9 Min.
|
| agree |
Trudy Peters
3 Stunden
|
| agree |
Narasimhan Raghavan
6 Stunden
|
| agree |
Michele Johnson
8 Stunden
|
|
Thanks
|
|
| agree |
TonyTK
: Pavarotti?
13 Stunden
|
| agree |
Anil Kelkar
13 Stunden
|
| agree |
Aniello Scognamiglio (X)
15 Stunden
|
| agree |
Maureen Holm, J.D., LL.M.
2 Tage 1 Stunde
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|
Thanks
|
28 Min.
with many VIPs
I'm just keeping it brief! Why say numerous when many will do?
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