Glossary entry (derived from question below)
German term or phrase:
darauf baut Österreich
English translation:
What Austria builds on
Added to glossary by
Ramey Rieger (X)
Jun 13, 2017 08:59
6 yrs ago
German term
darauf baut Österreich
German to English
Marketing
Marketing
marketing slogan/copywriting
DARAUF BAUT ÖSTERREICH
FACHMESSE BAU
Die xxxx ist als Österreichs größte Messe fürs Bauen, Sanieren, Renovieren und Einrichten sowohl bei Fachbesuchern als auch bei privaten Bauherren fix verankert.
This is what Austria is built upon?
Vielen Dank!
FACHMESSE BAU
Die xxxx ist als Österreichs größte Messe fürs Bauen, Sanieren, Renovieren und Einrichten sowohl bei Fachbesuchern als auch bei privaten Bauherren fix verankert.
This is what Austria is built upon?
Vielen Dank!
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +1 | What Austria builds on | Ramey Rieger (X) |
3 +3 | Austria is built on it | europa-services |
3 | Austria's building blocks | Katarina Peters |
3 | Why Austria is on solid ground | Michael Martin, MA |
Proposed translations
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What Austria builds on
Would be the literal translation. I kinda like:
Assembling/Building Austria
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Note added at 4 days (2017-06-17 12:13:36 GMT)
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Hi Martina!
AUSTRIA ON SITE
Assembling/Building Austria
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Note added at 4 days (2017-06-17 12:13:36 GMT)
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Hi Martina!
AUSTRIA ON SITE
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Björn Vrooman
: Or something based on one of the suggestions in the d-box. If possible, slogans/taglines should not be about word-for-word translation. Titles of conferences etc. are a bit of a different issue.
4 days
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "thanks a lot!"
3 hrs
Austria's building blocks
just a suggestion.
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9 hrs
Austria is built on it
Again, just a suggestion. Or what about a more simple "Building Austria"?
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Note added at 9 hrs (2017-06-13 18:06:21 GMT)
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Actually, as far as slogans go, I often find the simpler they are, the more memorable they tend to be!
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Note added at 9 hrs (2017-06-13 18:06:21 GMT)
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Actually, as far as slogans go, I often find the simpler they are, the more memorable they tend to be!
Peer comment(s):
agree |
michael10705 (X)
: but perhaps changing the tense to read "Austria is building on it"
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agree |
Eleanore Strauss
: I actually agree Building Austria is what came to mind... also most memorable
8 hrs
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agree |
seehand
: Both are good ones and "is building on it" as Michael suggested
12 hrs
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neutral |
Ramey Rieger (X)
: 1. I already suggested Building Austria, but that, too is missing the 'rely on' aspect.
1 day 20 hrs
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3 days 17 hrs
Why Austria is on solid ground
Fascinating challenge this query. It better be graded soon. Otherwise, I may feel compelled to keep tweet.., ahem, tweaking…
Discussion
Best wishes and enjoy your weekend!
Yes, sometimes discussion are useful!
Well, your version is much better, IMO, than the one with the most agreements to date - built looks to the past. Also note that sometimes, Germans use country names when they are actually referring to the people. Let me illustrate:
Fachmesse Bau
Build on Austrian ideas
Used the adjective, but something with "Austrians" may also work. And I say tagline because I think it should come after the name in English, not before. Yours can be used in front, my suggestions (including the one below) can't.
Maybe Martina should say something. I don't know who her contractee is, but if it isn't the organizer of the trade show, you may have to run the whole thing by him or her first.
Best wishes
Austria - Build on It
"Austria both relies or banks on the trade fair for revenues, marketing value, etc."
I cannot agree to the second part:
"builds/produces the trade fair"
This is not what is meant. People go to the trade show/fair to "build on" the knowledge/contacts/contracts acquired there for newbuilds/renovations/refurbishments/upgrades/retrofits.
In that sense, Austria Builds Connections is a nice idea. I am not so sure about "Building (up)" - when was the last time you heard someone say "Building (up) the United States / Kingdom"? Did I miss out on some social experiment or WWIII?
Additionally, I don't think you should "spice up" the German here. It makes the whole tagline sound pretty impersonal.
Could the following sentences be of use?
"Build on ideas where you heard (about) them first. In Austria."
Building up Austria
Austria Builds Connections
Building Austrian Power/Strength....