Dec 5, 2007 16:34
16 yrs ago
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Russian term

колбаса и сосиски

Russian to English Art/Literary General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Any way to preserve the difference here and avoid "sausage and sausage"? I thought about kielbasa, but it is a more specific kind of sausage than колбаса to my ear. The author is remembering 1932 Rostov-na-Donu so I don't want to say "hot dogs" either. Frankfurters?

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Зима 1932–1933 года в Ростове-на-Дону. Мне семь лет. Все чаще я слышу слово «голод». Появляются и другие – новые слова: рабкоп, карточки, боны, торгсин. Мама относит туда свой перстень и пару серебряных ложек – наше семейное богатство. Торгсин для меня – сказка. Я стою у витрин с выставленными там колбасами, сосисками, черной икрой, конфетами, шоколадом, пирожными. Не прошу: прекрасно понимаю, что купить этого мама не может. Самое большое, что ей удавалось купить для меня, – это немного риса и кусочек масла.
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Apr 6, 2008 19:55: Mikhail Kropotov changed "Field" from "Other" to "Art/Literary"

Proposed translations

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5 mins
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sausages and wieners/frankfurters

Should work
Peer comment(s):

agree Natasha Hunter
2 mins
agree Alexander Demyanov
5 mins
agree maxomel
20 mins
agree Vanda Nissen
28 mins
agree The Misha
2 hrs
agree tutta_karlson
3 hrs
agree svetlana cosquéric
4 hrs
agree esperantisto
14 hrs
agree Andrew Vdovin
17 hrs
agree Alexandra Tussing
4 days
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+5
4 mins

salami and sausages

Not exactly equivalent but will do I think
Peer comment(s):

agree Mikhail Kropotov : Копченая колбаса (salami) must have been a real luxury at the time... But it's a nice solution to the redundancy problem.
2 mins
thanks
agree Alexander Onishko
2 mins
thanks
agree Sonia Clough
4 mins
thanks
neutral Alexander Demyanov : 1. Sausage is common name for колбаса, сардельки, сосиски, etc. 2. Salami is just one of several types of колбаса//2. Whatever the text is on, "salami and sausages" is a construct rather close to "translators and people"
5 mins
yes, but this is not a text on food products
agree Iosif JUHASZ
3 hrs
thanks
agree Alexandra Tussing
4 days
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+2
6 mins

sausage and hot dogs

I know you didn't want to use 'hot dogs,' but for an American audience I think it is best. It is highly processed, inexpensive meat - an American 7-year-old would definitely call it hot dogs.
Peer comment(s):

agree Blithe : Why not? "hot dogs" - that's exactly what сосиски are.
2 hrs
agree Alexandra Tussing
4 days
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+5
9 mins

different types of sausage (rolls)

I do not think you can preserve the exact difference in English; I would try to avoid this using smth like this.
Peer comment(s):

agree Alexander Demyanov : or just "sausage", to cover both колбаса and сосиски
2 mins
agree Natalia Potashnik : I would say "various sausages" since there is no English equivalent to Russian колбаса
25 mins
agree Ekaterina Filatova : 'different types' is the best option to underline the contrast between the hunger at homes and the abundance at the store
46 mins
agree Vladimir Dubisskiy
1 hr
neutral The Misha : All the original flair is lost
2 hrs
I agree! - It is lost, but what can we do? I still believe it is better than using one of the American terms, suggetsed by many colleagues: this would bring a completely foreign flavor to the Soviet Russia of 1930s.
agree Alexandra Tussing
4 days
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+3
26 mins

sausages and sausage links

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Peer comment(s):

agree The Misha : That's another good one if one wants to avoid hot dogs
1 hr
Thank you!
agree Irina Romanova-Wasike : sausage links would do nicely :)
19 hrs
Спасибо:-)
agree Alexandra Tussing
4 days
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+1
1 hr

variety / assortment of sausage (or just 'range/ assortment of food')

it does not matter whether they were selling salami, bologna or weiners / frankfurters - I actually doubt that in 1932 there were frankfurters / weiners back in the USSR.

The variety / the number / assortment of food presented - in fact that impressed the author.

Why go literal instead of putting something like:

I saw a wild variety / assortment of food: sausages, caviar, chocolates, candies...
Peer comment(s):

neutral The Misha : Same proble as with Mr. Reznikov, the original nuance gets lost
45 mins
agree Irina Romanova-Wasike : I'd also not go into viennas, franks and so forth, given the year .. Just "I look at that wild variety of sausage,..".
18 hrs
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3 hrs

hard/cooked salami and sausages

Hard salami is salami that has been cured rather than cooked. Can be eaten without further treatment. Cooked salami also ready for consumption. Sausages need to be cooked before they can be eqaten
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3 hrs

kielbasa, salami, bologna, hot dogs

В английском языке и правда нет прямого соответствия слову "колбаса". Советская колбаса слишком уж разнообразна для одного английского слова. :о) Так что поскольку в тексте оригинала речь идет именно о "колбасах", то есть о нескольких сортах колбасы, в переводе я бы просто перечислила несколько сортов. Думаю, в Ростове 30-х годов вполне могло быть в наличии что-нибудь вроде kielbasa, salami и bologna. (Наверное, раз там черная икра упоминается, то и копченная колбаса - не слишком шикарно, так что salami вполне пойдет)
Не пойму, почему все так дружно твердят о sausage. В Америке sausage - это сырой мясной фарш, приправленный определенным образом, скатанный в колбаски и предназначенный для обжарки на сковороде или гриле. Так что уж sausage - это однозначно не колбаса (несмотря на то, что именно такой перевод дается в словарях и учебниках)
Что касается сосисок, не вижу ничего зазорного в термине hot dogs. Ну, а не хотите hot dogs, пусть будет franks.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Sergei Tumanov : да потому и твердим, что у нас тут это колбаса: http://www.polygon.ee/portal/modules/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=... http://www.narvaaed.ee/modules/news/article.php?storyid=23
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13 hrs

sausage and hots, sausage and hotdogs, sausage and wieners

as you are in the US, I should think you might say sausage and hot dogs / hots



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Note added at 13 hrs (2007-12-06 05:53:03 GMT)
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but as you prefer not to say hots or hot dogs, i would stick with wieners or franks.
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1 day 58 mins

kielbasa and sausages

I see no reason to reject "kielbasa". Growing up in a rural Russian community, I always thought of "kielbasa" as something exclusively Russian (I was, naturally, mistaken (c:), existing in various varieties.

This excerpt from the wikipedia definition of "kielbasa" suggests that the name covers a wide variety, and is not too specific for your context.

"In the U.S., "kielbasa" almost always means some form of wiejska (although often not U-shaped and seldom containing veal), which may be unsmoked ("fresh") or fully or partly smoked. Similar sausages are found in other Slavic nations as well, notably the Czech Republic (spelled "klobás") and Slovakia (spelled "klobása"). In Ukraine "kovbasa" is properly pronounced /kovbɑsɑ/, but in English is usually pronounced /ˈkʌbɑsɑ/."

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Note added at 1 day1 hr (2007-12-06 17:36:16 GMT)
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Also, in this context, I think that both "hot dogs" and "frankfurters" are indeed too specific a translation for сосиски, of which the varieties are endless, and the translation of which should be accordingly open-ended, as in "sausages".
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1 day 21 hrs

both cooked and raw sausages/sausages of all kind - cooked, raw, smoked, cured

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